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Another Bloody Mistake by ~Servial:iconServial:





From the heart pumps the blood,
that rushes to your head.
That reaches your face,
and turns your eyes red.
It takes all the pain,
and numbs it away,
and makes you forgett about the scars in your brain.
All the worthless emotions and thoughtless desires,
your guilt and your shame,
and your heart thats on fire!

This pointless game,
makes you go insane...
But the scars from the flames,
will never...
go...
away.

The blood from your eyes,
travels up to your forehead.
where the scar from the fight,
gushes blood that is pure red.
The thoughts still reside,
and are able to hide.
But the pain from the game,
still...
remains.

The blood from the cuts,
flows down your bruised face.
Where the tears from your eyes,
mix up and make pure hate.
It flows to your mouth,
and fuels your thoughts...
Watch out,
here it comes...
its another ...
mistake.
©2004-2009 ~Servial
:iconservial:

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:icondeaths-last-stand:
Wow... this is very, very good! :clap: It reminds me of what I've been feeling recently... hmmm :+fav: I do believe. ^.^

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.~*^*~.Kayla.~*^*~.

~thevampirechronicles - Go. Now.

~Brave-Ireland - Here too.
:iconservial:
thank you

--
Look up.
Now down.
Now up.

Hear that rattle?
That's you!
:iconsundance624:
deffinatly:+fave: thats deep and i know how you feel

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*~When the rich assemble to concern themselves with the buesiness of the poor it is called charity. When the poor assemble themselves with the busness of the rich it is called anarchy~* Paul Richard
:iconservial:
thank you very much... its just that lately i cant seem to keep the concept out of my head. And its awesome to know theres people out there who feel the same

--
Look up.
Now down.
Now up.

Hear that rattle?
That's you!
:icondevlz-advoc8:
This is so good! You saying you don't write good poems...tsk. Just to show that you do, I'ma fav this.

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Drip. Drip. Plop.
:pacman:
:iconservial:
wow thanx ^^

--
Look up.
Now down.
Now up.

Hear that rattle?
That's you!
:iconpsychobullet:
A writer AND an artist. Nice.

--
KAPUT
:iconservial:
Jack of all trades... master of none...

--
Look up.
Now down.
Now up.

Hear that rattle?
That's you!
:iconpsychobullet:
Heh. Better to have several things you can do adequately than one thing you put all your time into. What if it doesn't work out?

That be-eth my own saying.

--
KAPUT

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